Interesting what you're doing with the logos, but I find the varying line weights distracting. I think the outlines of the bigger letters should be the same as the smaller letters, while the smallest words, like "the" and "of" should just be solid.
I think it's interesting using different colors for the opening crawls, but Jedi needs to be lighter (nothing really wrong with Empire,but the blue crawl does remind me of Spaceballs. :P)