doubleofive said:Bingowings said:Here's my first stab at beefing up the crawl :
I love this new crawl. Can you type it out for us in whole?
"STAR WARS
Episode VI
THE RETURN OF THE JEDI
The Alliance is doomed.
Hunted by the Imperial Star Fleet and suffering terrible losses the Rebels have retreated to the rim world of SULLUST hoping to strike back against the tyrannical EMPIRE.
Sensing ultimate victory LORD VADER and his cruel EMPEROR have begun construction of a new battlestation even more powerful than the first dreaded DEATH STAR.
Luke Skywalker has returned to his homeworld of TATOOINE to rescue his friend Han Solo from the vile gangster JABBA THE HUTT unaware of the sinister plots laid against him...."