ChainsawAsh said:
I wrote a short scene between Anakin and Obi-Wan aboard the spice freighter. It was just a thought I had to get across the characters of Anakin and Obi-Wan, and the information about the Sith pirates and the nature of Vader. I think it does a good job of getting a lot of information across in a short period of time, without having to build the Vader thing up over several movies as some have suggested would need to be done. Tell me what you think:

Rapidshare (can only be downloaded 10 times - if it gets DL'ed more than that and others still want it, I'll re-up it)

not bad. not bad. I'm almost warming up to the whole Sith pirate idea. I'm still adamant that Anakin be a bit younger though. He even seems young and naive in your portrayal of him. He should be 16 or 17 not yet truly an adult but old enough. It still unsettling that there could be a Vader other than Vader though. I have always thought of Darth Vader as a unique character, not only pirate leaders in a long line of pirate leaders. Anakin/Vader should be something the galaxy has never seen before, that strikes fear into the hearts of his enemies. Seeing that Vader is just another Vader diminishes his character for me.