Darth Godbold said:
The Handmaiden And The Slave Boy i like maybe i will change the score to cheesy 70's porno music
With that one I was thinking more along the lines of "The Thief And The Cobbler" but I see your point.
As to the non-dubbing route, one of the best example I've seen recently are the Slumberland Edits.
Jar-Jar is still Jar-Jar (not a foul mouthed wise cracker or a Jedi) but he actually made me laugh for the first time in almost a decade.
I still think there is a really good hybrid of all the different edits already done to be made.
I've yours up to breaking the blockade and heading for Tatooine.
Some of the sound editing is similar to Slumberland (though he manages to make the Gungans even less annoying), there are a few breaks which hang in the air a bit (almost like the commercials are about to kick in) and there is a very uncomfortable cut during the blockade sequence while R2 is fixing the hyperdrive. I can't quite see the point of the shot of the bigger fish eating the big fish staying in (it sees to be setting up a bit of danger for latter which doesn't actually happen).
But overall for a first go it's looking fine.