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My Phantom Menace Edit... 'The Uncle Fester Mix' (Completed) — Page 2

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I agreed with you in the first place... The Phantom Menace is still a very good SW title, and it fits the format, and is relevant in IMO. You should just simply call it Star Wars: The Phantom Menace: The Darth Godbold edit.

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Episode I: A Planet in Peril

You know of the rebellion against the Empire?

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A controversial idea i have put forward before, but perhaps just STAR WARS, and pretend all the others are sequels......(winces)

 

just finished watching your edit btw, very well executed. clean cuts and i honestly didnt feel as if i was watching an edit. i think what someone said earlier was true, which is that it wasnt anything too original as far as TPM edits go, but still a dramatic improvement on the original!

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cheers this was first attempt at video editing

so i am very pleased with your comments,

 

Personally i like the title shadows of the jedi

im trying to think what i can do to make my edit special

i dont like the idea  of dubbing the alien languages,

 

so im left with not much else to do,

perhaps aply a cartoon effect or something

suggestions appreciated

 

cheers

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Darth Godbold said:

 

The Handmaiden And The Slave Boy i like maybe i will change the score to cheesy 70's porno music

With that one I was thinking more along the lines of "The Thief And The Cobbler" but I see your point.

As to the non-dubbing route, one of the best example I've seen recently are the Slumberland Edits.

Jar-Jar is still Jar-Jar (not a foul mouthed wise cracker or a Jedi) but he actually made me laugh for the first time in almost a decade.

I still think there is a really good hybrid of all the different edits already done to be made.

I've yours up to breaking the blockade and heading for Tatooine.

Some of the sound editing is similar to Slumberland (though he manages to make the Gungans even less annoying), there are a few breaks which hang in the air a bit (almost like the commercials are about to kick in) and there is a very uncomfortable cut during the blockade sequence while R2 is fixing the hyperdrive. I can't quite see the point of the shot of the bigger fish eating the big fish staying in (it sees to be setting up a bit of danger for latter which doesn't actually happen).

But overall for a first go it's looking fine.

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STARS WARS EPISODE I:

Bastard and Apendice

The Rabbit Monster

The Phantom Realisator

The Hood, the Bald and the Moldy (... All in one !)

 

PS: ... Of course the bald could also be called the horny

ESB AUDIOPHILE EDITION

 

The EMPIRE STRIKES BACK Score: "All-Sourced" Restoration & Sonic Achievement.

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perhaps you can let me know which cuts hang so i can try to fix them also

im sure i can take the monster eating the monster out

 

but jar jar mentions that planet core is bad summin

so i figured leave it in?

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Darth Godbold said:

perhaps you can let me know which cuts hang so i can try to fix them also

im sure i can take the monster eating the monster out

 

but jar jar mentions that planet core is bad summin

so i figured leave it in?

Slumberland and others get around this by removing all mention of the planet core.

 

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I can't quite see the point of the shot of the bigger fish eating the big fish staying in (it sees to be setting up a bit of danger for latter which doesn't actually happen).

Sure the scene is a bit silly and useless, but I like Qui-Gon saying, "there's always a bigger fish", it always makes think of Palpatine and rings a bell to the title of the movie.

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TMBTM said:

I can't quite see the point of the shot of the bigger fish eating the big fish staying in (it sees to be setting up a bit of danger for latter which doesn't actually happen).

Sure the scene is a bit silly and useless, but I like Qui-Gon saying, "there's always a bigger fish", it always makes think of Palpatine and rings a bell to the title of the movie.

 

 I was saying that in the context of Darth Godbold's edit (he takes out most of the Bongo scenes but keeps the long necked fish chomping on the other fish only without it attacking the ship).

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i suppose its in there for a kind of look at that moment

it is indeed useless but i never thought of it as being distracting

 

and i think i may go with the name

       STAR WARS

         Episode I

 Shadows Of The Jedi

 

but im not sure really sounds good to me

 

also some linked me to

http://originaltrilogy.com/forum/topic.cfm/UPDATED-v0-4-Star-Wars-Opening-Crawl-After-Effects-Template-SEE-FIRST-POST/topic/9001/page/1/

i figured out how to arrange the crawl but i want to change the framerate to 25fps

and i think the aspect ratio is kinda messed up

it renders in 4:3 ect

 

can anyone help?

 

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the reason i liked shadows of the jedi,

 

Shadows (plural) being the two sith i.e sidious and maul

Shadows Of The Jedi being the darkside of the jedi i.e. the sith

i dunno but it struck a chord somehow

keep suggestions coming so i can make a crawl also bingowings

can you point out specifically which cuts hang in the air

so i can take a second look at them,

 

one more thing any suggestions to make my edit stand out from the rest (something which has'nt been done) would be appreciated

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im still seeding

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My only advice would be to watch as many other edits as possible and make an edit that takes from the best of what has already been done, also check out the various threads about prequel edits and see if any of the ideas click with you and try them out.

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I have now made many alterations and have finished my edit i have authored a dual layer dvd

with new menus ect,

 

all i need to do now is put it up on fanedit (i need some help doing this)

and could use some help creating a dvd cover

 

The title for the edit is

Star Wars - Episode I - The Uncle Fester Mix

 

Here's some screens of the menu

First Play Screen

 

 

Main

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Homo sapiens, the first truly free species, is about to decommission natural selection, the force that made us.... Soon we must look deep within ourselves and decide what we wish to become.

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/\ /\ /\ /\ /\

 BUMP

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Any help with a dvd cover and putting it up on fanedit would be appreciated

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BUMP,

 

 

...AGAIN

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