Hmmm, I did somewhat like that, but it was far too long and the montage kinda ruined it. I guess I would like the end music to be a variation of the force theme or the throne room music. The music should have a somewhat familiar sound to it but also have an epic ending.
Another suggestion: Fix Luke's lazy eye as he's watching Darth Vader burning. I donno if it's just me but I've always been annoyed by that lazy eye of his that only seems to show up at that one part.