Darth Godbold said:
thanks for your enthusiasm i wanted to keep the title of the film purely because i wouldnt know how to go about making a new crawl and ive personally never thought that the name phantom menace was bad,

i am pretty happy with when i first thought id finished i created a dvd and noticed a few problems

and have spent along time making sure the audio and video cuts are as smooth as possible with no

noticable issues,

the only thing i was unsure about was the alternate ending

the version i have rendered includes the celebration but i also have a version saved where the credits drop after the qui gon funeral sequence.

i actually prefer having the celebration in for some reason, i feel it helps to give the movie an easier transition into the credits

The only thing I'd add there is that it almost creates the impression that they are having one hell of a wake for the guy (almost as if they don't really like him that much).

I'd toy with the idea of having a truncated celebration first, Yoda and Obi-wan discuss Anakin's future, then the funeral then a pan up to the sky.

That way it ends on bitter sweet note instead of a sweet and sour one.

As to crawls, it's a bit old but here's a good site hope it helps :

http://www.alienryderflex.com/crawl/

Though you need an apple to do it with that.