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Just forgot to add that Adywan can't 'reverse' the other shots instead, as this would mess-up the 'arm' of the Millennium Falcon then!
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Don't worry imp we spotted that too LOL ;-)
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steamboy said:Hello everybody and greetings from Sweden!
First, let me give a standing ovation to ANH:R and pass on my good wishes to the wonderful outlook of this thrilling project! I discovered ANH:R during the Christmas holidays and became an instant ambassador for your superior version.
My foremost issue with Empire is that lazy “Two fighters against a Star destroyer?” line performed with flawless retardation prior to the Hoth battle. I would love a redub on that one. Either way, looking forward to the finished edit and it will be fun to track your continuing progress.
Best regards!
Hello from me too.
As to the line I actually quite like the delivery, he sounds like a normal bloke (not everyone in the Star Wars universe is going to sound like Sir Alec).
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We always noticed that line too, but it never occured to me that it would be worth changing. I agree with the "normal guy" stance. I wouldn't mind if Ady changed it, but I don't mind it the way it is either.
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ImpFighter...Dude..Way, way too much time spare!!
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Thanks for the welcome!
If that guy is normal, it's pretty clear why they lost Hoth to the Empire ; ) Well, I dont mind him being a normal guy, but his reaction (reading the line) should sound more like "What the fuck!?" instead of "Yeah the Empire... but has anyone seen my stapler?".
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steamboy said:If that guy is normal, it's pretty clear why they lost Hoth to the Empire ; ) Well, I dont mind him being a normal guy, but his reaction (reading the line) should sound more like "What the fuck!?" instead of "Yeah the Empire... but has anyone seen my stapler?".
Hahaha. You definitely have a good point there. Ok, you've convinced me. :)
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ImperialFighter said:
Here are a few suggestions:
(1) add a moving star field - the stars do not have to be moving fast, but it could be something to play with just to see how it looks (being that the moving star field during the MF escape in ANH really added to the scene).
(2) moving the top/right SD more to the right side of the screen to account for the farther distance between it and the Avenger in the following shots. I also understand that having the star field moving here and the following shot would look strange, being that it would give the impression that the front 2 SDs are slowing down and even moving in reverse (which could be interesting in of itself, being that the other commanders would be doing some sort of evasive manuevering) still, something to play with, being that it may add to the sense of vertigo the scene already implies visually.
(3) you could use this shot from ANH (move the right SD more along side the left SD) to replace the distant SD shot in image (1) - these are a bit closer and thus allow us to see more detail, not to mention the SDs probably should have been closer (to the MF, not each other), considering how fast they closed in on the Avenger in the following shots.
I also think the reverse bridge shot looks fine, not to mention it should be a lot easier to flip Needa's rank placement than mess with what is outside the window.
On another note: the sounds of the SDs crashing together in the bridge shot could have been the shields of both SDs hitting/repelling each other, as opposed to the physical bulk of the ships making any sort of contact themselves.
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I think Ady should have a contest to see who should dub over the "Two fighters..." line.
Or just let me do it. ;-)
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doubleofive said:I think Ady should have a contest to see who should dub over the "Two fighters..." line.
Or just let me do it. ;-)
That would be pretty cool to have a cameo (even in audio form) in one of the Revisited series...
I say begin the contest!
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I don't really see the problem with that guy. I mean, you don't want him to sound dumb, but you don't want him to sound like he's sassing the princess, either. His delivery should be fairly flat with a hint of incredulousness to it, which is pretty much what it is right now.
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on the cameo topic, maybe ady should dub over fetts lines...just add a bizarre take on that closed debate
arm in ANH, voice in ESB, he can make an actual physical appearance in ROTJ.
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ben_danger said:on the cameo topic, maybe ady should dub over fetts lines...just add a bizarre take on that closed debate
arm in ANH, voice in ESB, he can make an actual physical appearance in ROTJ.
Ady was in ANH as a Rebel Guard in the final scene.
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Don't change the "Two fighters against a star destroyer" line! the delivery is so stupid and amusing i love hearing it every time i watch it!
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The Golden Idol said:ben_danger said:on the cameo topic, maybe ady should dub over fetts lines...just add a bizarre take on that closed debate
arm in ANH, voice in ESB, he can make an actual physical appearance in ROTJ.
Ady was in ANH as a Rebel Guard in the final scene.
really?? which one?
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ben_danger said:The Golden Idol said:ben_danger said:on the cameo topic, maybe ady should dub over fetts lines...just add a bizarre take on that closed debate
arm in ANH, voice in ESB, he can make an actual physical appearance in ROTJ.
Ady was in ANH as a Rebel Guard in the final scene.
really?? which one?
From doubleofive's Picasa gallery:
"Me" is Ady.
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that is pretty cool.
ill keep an out for a bearded ugnaught then perhaps.:P
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tehe!
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The Golden Idol said:ben_danger said:The Golden Idol said:ben_danger said:on the cameo topic, maybe ady should dub over fetts lines...just add a bizarre take on that closed debate
arm in ANH, voice in ESB, he can make an actual physical appearance in ROTJ.
Ady was in ANH as a Rebel Guard in the final scene.
really?? which one?
From doubleofive's Picasa gallery:
"Me" is Ady.
the bearded guy and the new officer look like the same two officers, only they're flipped around.
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When Luke downs the AT-AT and its head explodes, the screen goes black right before the next cut. I guess this was done since there's no flying debris (originating from the head in the close up shot) in the following full shot of the walker.
Adding some random falling artbeats debris in the full shot could give way to eliminate the black screen and tie the clips together more elegant.
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HotRod said:ImpFighter...Dude..Way, way too much time spare!! ;)
Well my problem at the moment is that I don't have as much spare time as I'd like, to concentrate on this! I actually have quite a hectic life between work and family life at the moment, which is getting in the way of contributing a few more things on the actual suggestions front yet. I'm trying to get the wife to see just how 'theraputic' it is for me to work my way through certain....er....'issues' here, that I have with my favourite trilogy, and that I'm nearly there, but I don't think she's fully convinced yet. Girls, eh?
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Amen Brother!
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It might be nice to have an added TIE laserbolt to this 2 secs. long shot, considering that in the shots before and afterwards, the TIES are firing furiously at the Millennium Falcon. In fact, just after Leia says "Saw what?" as Han starts to speak, there seems to be some kind of sound effect from outside the cockpit that could tie-in with this. It would add subtly to the 'intensity' of the whole scene a little, just before the Millennium Falcon dives downwards.
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Monroville said:
(3) you could use this shot from ANH (move the right SD more along side the left SD) to replace the distant SD shot in image (1) - these are a bit closer and thus allow us to see more detail, not to mention the SDs probably should have been closer (to the MF, not each other), considering how fast they closed in on the Avenger in the following shots.
I also think the reverse bridge shot looks fine, not to mention it should be a lot easier to flip Needa's rank placement than mess with what is outside the window.On another note: the sounds of the SDs crashing together in the bridge shot could have been the shields of both SDs hitting/repelling each other, as opposed to the physical bulk of the ships making any sort of contact themselves.
Monroville, I didn't go all the way and suggest using those actual 'nearer' unused Stardestroyer elements at the time, because the 'cockpit' shot in my above post is approx. 2 secs. long in itself, and then the intervening 'close-ups' of the crew are approx. 10 secs. long, on top of that. During all this time, the Stardestroyers are coming towards the Falcon at an unknown rate, and the Falcon is certainly heading towards them at quite a rapid rate, as it's chased by the TIEs and 'Avenger' during this approx. 12 secs.
Another thing to consider, is that during the full shot of that unused Stardestroyers one above, they seem to get 'nearer' to us pretty quickly over the approx. 2 secs. it lasts. The shot above is the START of that shot, and below is the rest of it, to see what I mean:
The middle of the shot -
The end of the shot -
So it's hard to judge if these elements at the START of the shot (levelled off, more in line with each other) would seem too big to use or not, as a starting point in the 'cockpit' shot, at the size that they currently are. But I do like the idea of how this could look and fit into the overall sequence from a 'visual' standpoint, considering the 'stately' speed of the Stardestroyers in the other shots anyway....only I reckon the 'starting' size should probably have been somewhere between the 2 sizes, to begin with, but I'm happy with whatever Adywan decides himself.
By the way, I really like that idea of yours that the 'crashing' sound is just the noise of the Stardestroyer's SHIELDS coming into contact with each other, rather than them actually coming into contact with each other and scraping the sides of each other. That would have been good to see on the 'subtitles' rather than [Crash]. :)
On the other hand, if Adywan decides to add a subtle hint of 'debris' floating from the area where they might have actually collided a little, then that is neat too. The choice is his.
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Oh my god! I love the whole detail you are noticing but from the other hand its a movie and the time in a movie is diferent from the runtime. Whatever :P Be my Guest :)
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