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ImperialFighter
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STAR WARS: EP V "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - 12GB 1080p MP4 VERSION AVAILABLE NOW
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21-Jan-2009, 9:30 AM

Here's the extra comments about the FIRST shot in the previous sequence that I couldn't show before, as the additional screenshot at the bottom here would have messed-up the correct order of sequence shots that I wanted to show at the time. 

So this is IN ADDITION TO the previous post, and ties-in with with my previous points in general about where the 'positioning' of the 2 'oncoming' Stardestroyers ended up, by the time they got to the start of the LAST shot in the sequence (as shown in Shot 12 beforehand) -

The start of the FIRST 'oncoming Stardestroyers' shot, which lasts approx. 2 secs. -

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a115/doubleofive/IF-SD/SD2-001.jpg

Near the end of the FIRST 'oncoming Stardestroyers' shot -  (Note: The Stardestroyer on the right goes up just slightly higher yet, before the shot completely ends)

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a115/doubleofive/IF-SD/SD2-002.jpg

Again, you would need to watch the 'movements' onscreen, but the 2 'oncoming' Stardestroyers in both shots above would possibly be better positioned a little further apart at this point in the distance, too.

To recap a little: To allow more of a gap between the 2 'oncoming' Stardestroyers initially, so that they then have enough distance between them to more convincingly be able to 'converge' together a little, into a slightly-angled 'pincer movement' as they approach the Millennium Falcon, by the time we get to some of the shots afterwards that indicate that they did so, especially the distance apart that is shown by Shot 12 in the previous post.

And to also briefly recap:  If you did this, the 'oncoming' Stardestroyer on our right here, shown above (which the 'Avenger' eventually goes under), could possibly be made to go more obviously SLIGHTLY HIGHER than the left one as they come towards us, to tie-in better to the shot shown below that follows 10 secs. later.  (Especially if you do RAISE that 'prow' on the left of the frame in the shot below, a little bit....)

The end of the SECOND 'oncoming Stardestroyers' shot (which we see approx. 10 secs. AFTER the above shot) -

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a115/doubleofive/IF-SD/SD2-005.jpg

Also, to go back to the shot shown at the top , where we FIRST see the 2 'oncoming' Stardestroyers -

Here's an example below of something approximating the distance apart from each other that I reckon might have looked better at that point, when they are first spotted by Chewie and Han  (Note: I don't mean that the height of the one on the right, in the shot below, is correct in comparison to the one beside it, it's not, it's TOO much higher than the other one)  I just mean the slightly bigger WIDTH of the overall 'gap' between the Stardestroyers below is a good example of what I'm trying to get across.  See what you think  -

Start of the shot where 2 Stardestroyers chase Millennium Falcon from Mos Eisly (unused by Adywan for good reasons at the time) - 

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a115/doubleofive/IF-SD/SD2-020.jpg

 

Finally for now, I'll post that reversed 'Avenger' Bridge 'interior' shot in a seperate post with some comments on it, shortly.