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Okay, I've just been flicking through the film and have two early suggestions for you.
I think you should remove the title as is since it actually simply reads 'matrix' rather than 'the matrix' - The movie is marketed as THE Matrix and characters within the story always refer to it as THE matrix and not just matrix.
Secondly I think it would be better placed after the initial scenes with Trinity. After Smith rams the phone box the 3 agents look at the rubble and the camera pulls into the telephone handset and zooms to a fully black screen, I'd think this a good place for the title reveal. the title sequence also does look a tad dull compared to the sequels.
My other suggestion is something i noticed while tinkering with the colours...After escaping the matrix Neo asks Morpheus why his eyes hurt, and he is told that he has never used them. Having been asleep for that long maybe you could add some focus distortion to [at least some of] the shots where neo awakens in the real world. I think there are about 3 shots from his direct POV. nothing to overboard just subtle.
Thoughts?