Originally posted by Adywan:
"As i said before i want to somehow show a better reason why Anakin's lungs became so damaged that he needed help breathing when i get to ROTS."
Okay, if you can pull it off then more power to you.
Originally posted by TMBTM:
"Maybe replacing the scream by a long painful "breathing for air" sound (don't know how to say in english...)..."
Wheezing?