ok,
i have the first part, still watching it...
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1 great job on synchronizing the sound to the action ,.... very good!
2 nice job on cutting out all the extra dialogue..
3 i wish the text was bigger, and not as blocky...
4 also, i know the stories, but it can get confusing when more than
one person is having a dialogue, and you don't know who said what..
later
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