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Post #333736

Author
cyclades
Parent topic
Kingdom of the Crystal Skull Edit Suggestions
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Date created
19-Oct-2008, 5:55 PM

More suggestions.

In this, Mac still comes out second, but Indy's close up is delayed. Actually makes the scene seem more brutal and dangerous.

Removed Mac talking about a bet. I know it's a set up for later, but who cares about his "reason" greed was enough, and more honest.

PLUS, took out Irina's crap mind reading which weakened her character from page one.

Note, want to have Indy say the you're embarrassing us line, but not used to the progam, couldn't see how to tweak the audio, but you get the idea.

http://fileload.us/2472022-Sequence_2.avi