Very nice edit Laser, and we still get the surprise of another fall! Of course it'd mean having to cut the 'three times it drops' dialogue of Ox at the camp site, but if the waterfall scene HAD to be cut, then I guess this is a clever way of doing it. Though I'm still an advocate of having the three drops just edited closer together!

One thing I wonder could be done to this edit, is matching up the scene where they go off the cliff to the next scene when they're in the water. We still see the branch below them just as they are going off the cliff, so could this be digitally removed? And seeing as in the next scene, it cut to them after the second waterfall drop with a waterfall behind them, could a waterfall be established at screen right just as they are going off the cliff? Then, could the scene after they go off the cliff be brightened, with them at the foot of a waterfall, so that it matches up more with when they went off the cliff?

Or is that all just crazy gibberish :S ?