6. The jungle chase and Monkees. This can be fixed. Too much to go into but a couple of notes. I like Indy's "Stop being a child" line, but cut Indy's "Find something to fight with". oh look how convenient, he told me to find something to fight with and look, Spalko's swords. I think it would work better if Mutt did this on his own. Get rid of Spalko shouting "JJOOOOOONNEEEEEEESSSS". Get rid of Mac's first "JOOOONNNESEY!!!!!!!!" It works the second time when he looks at him and says it softly, just before Indy says "Hi Mack" and then knocks him out. That feels like Indy. Cut the plants hitting Mutt in the crotch, re-cut the hand to hand fight between Spalko and Mutt, cut the CGI monkees, cut the 3 waterfalls. I'll post my re-cutting of this entire sequence when I'm happy with it.
Ok Here's my attempt at fixing the Jungle chase and waterfall madness. I like it, but I'm sure there are many ways to do it. This is just one of those.