I like the music for the gears, however the "water elevator" is boring and was already done in National Treasue. What do ya'll think about having there reaction to the coming water, seeing them get knocked around by it, then cutting to them flying out to the surface?
Nothing interesting happens on the slow ride up and the danger will seem more immediate and the water will seem more rapid if we take out the slow ascent.
Also, what if when they hit the dead end, instead of standing around and waiting and THEN reacting to the incoming water, it was cut so that it seems the water was right on thier heels?
Perhaps even slow the end when they are shot out, so it has more weight to it?
These are all just suggestions. I'd have to see it to know for sure how it would work, but it sure sounds good... What do ya'll think?