Adywan, I think I already mentioned this but I'll say it again. When you get to ROTJ revisited, you need to add a planet in the backround of Endore so Endore is actually a moon. Improve the effects of the window in the Emperor's throne room. Have Endore seen in the window in some of the shots and have it slowly move in continuity with the death star orbiting the moon. In the scene where they show the space battle from the window, they goofed. The battle is seen mixed with the Star Destroyers, but that doesn't actually happen until later in the film. So you'll have a lot of CGI work to do with ROTJ. If you have to include the celebration at the end of the film, you might want to consider taking out the Tatoonie celebration. The rebel alliance, the republic, and the empire had no significant influence on the societies on that planet. Why would they celebrate the fall of the empire, if it had no significant influence on them? That's is why Luke and Obi Wan went there for hiding. That is like America celebrating the Republic of Congo's independence day, irrelevant.