Yes, I was surprised the whole "there is no father" aspect was still in there as well. I'm also not sure if showing the final part of the "construction of vader" was a good idea, if you haven't seen the film yet that'd just be confusing. I think ;-)
Loved the narration.
Did you make those dubs for the neimoidians from scratch or are they from a different language version? Were they going to be subbed or not?