I liked the space battle, too. Looked like he knew exactly what he was doing. :) The Nemoidians sounded great! Quite natural.
I was surprised that you left in the "who was his father?" part. And also the 'rule of two,' but then it led to the close-up of Palpatine, so that was ok.
Anyway, that was a very fun viewing. Oh, and where was the narration from? "A Musical Journey"? I can't remember.