There were certainly somethings going right with this project.

I liked most of the mixing of Luke and Anakin's mutual family traumas. Though I would have kept with Anakin all the way from his finding the Tusken camp and that evil look after his mother's death. I would have then gone to the funeral scene at the farm with Beru and Owen young and alive which ends with a pan up at the sky. Then reversed the pan up at the end of Luke's scene to a pan down (not as easy as it sounds without the smoke going backwards) and then had his reaction to seeing their charred remains. And then on to Ben comforting him and Luke decaring his intent to follow in his father's bootsteps.

I would have kept the actual Tusken laser sword massacre scenes until his confession to Padme which would have followed next (as much as I love the mixing of Padme waiting to meet her deadly husband with the confession it is rather long...perhaps keeping the wanting to stop people from dying bit would be enough as it shows Padme falsly blaiming herself for Anakin's final fall.

The love scene montage is great but the clip of little Annie takes you out of the moment.

Though it's a mountain of hard work it might be worth making it so Boba Fett is the same guy in the mask in all the films (basically erasing Jengo from the timeline and really fleshing Boba's role out). If Jengo's armour could be recoloured to match the original films and we never saw him die in AOTC that would give us more Boba for our buck. It's a shame that we have so many clone faces on display because I would prefer to never find out what under that helmet.