heres a possible alternate crawl for Heir to the Empire.

original

HEIR TO THE EMPIRE

The New Republic has driven the

remnants of the old Imperial Starfleet

to a distant corner of the galaxy.

Princess Leia and Han Solo are

expecting two twins, and Luke

Skywalker has become the first

in a long-awaited line of Jedi Knights.

But thousands of light-years away,

the last of the Emperor's warlords

has taken command of the shattered

Imperial fleet, readied it for war, and

pointed it at the fragile heart of the

New Republic...

proposed:

HEIR TO THE EMPIRE

It is a challenging time for a fragile

Galaxy. The New Republic forces have

driven the Imperial Remnant ever deeper

into the dark corners of space.

Meanwhile, Leia Organa Solo, who is

pregnant with twins, is being trained by

her brother, Luke Skywalker, to become

one of the first in a series of JEDI KNIGHTS.

But thousands of light-years away, the

last of the Emperor's warlords has

taken command of the shattered

Imperial fleet, readied it for war, and

pointed it at the heart of the fledgling New Republic...