Tiptup said:

You should combine more sc-fi and fantasy worlds and be less Potter-centric, but otherwise it sounds fun. Though I hope you're not totally apposed to "scantily-clad women" being in the story; they're nice.

The inspiration for this story (besides the joke it started out as) was the Kingdom Hearts series of video games. In that game, the main character (Sora) is constantly accompanied by Goofy and Donald Duck, even though he meets characters from plenty of other films. Now that I've got a plot in my head, I want the Potter kids to be the Mary Sue's Donald and Goofy, in that they're almost always with him. As such, they get a bit more character development than the rest of the cast. Besides, it won't be Potter-centric in the usual sense, because Hogwarts is a huge crater by the end of the first act, and the Mary Sue's personal conflicts take center-stage for most of the story. There will be character arcs from other franchises, though. Don't worry. Oh, and as for scantily-clad women, there will be some sexual content, but nothing R-rated, since it's my experience that the written word is only truly arousing if there's some really heavy stuff going on, and I don't want to have to put a disclaimer on my fic.

Oh, and as I implied, the basic plotline is finished, and I am in the process of typing it up. This may take a few days (I've got a load of homework), but I'll post it when I'm through.