You should combine more sc-fi and fantasy worlds and be less Potter-centric, but otherwise it sounds fun. Though I hope you're not totally apposed to "scantily-clad women" being in the story; they're nice.
Post #323990
- Author
- Tiptup
- Parent topic
- An experiment in poor storytelling... *WARNING: High tolerance for bull**** required*
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/323990/action/topic#323990
- Date created
- 15-Jul-2008, 4:01 PM