I like the thought process... but at the same time, I find a lot of the edits to be... skitsafrenic...

Its not that I have trouble following... but I'm having trouble understanding the edits.

From what you've shown, a lot of it would be most apropriately understood as a sort of... montoge. ..

Like how it cuts between things. The issue, of course, is that you don't have John Williams at your disposal to write you an apropriate musical montoge to fit the video...

Its interesting... I like a lot of the ideas...