I just watched your ending clip again, and I like it much more now, so disregard what I wrote earlier. It's like if Leonardo Da Vinci had shown me Mona Lisa's smile only, and he asked for feedback. It's hard to judge a single clip without the whole package. So the goodness of this clip rests on what you do with the rest of the movie. However, this clip gives me a good idea what your aim is, and I'm digging it. I hope you continue to send clips like this in the future. I still haven't seen Resparked, but I will soon, and this should open my eyes more to your vision.