Johnny Ringo said:

I'd be happy for a bit more of the dialgue since there's not really much else going on during it...But I have to say I am impressed with the new ending as is.

I'm making another attempt at this, that will have some of the Linkin Park song, before the vocals come in, that fades into the orchestral piece. Will post that as soon as I'm done. I might still remove a little bit of the unneeded dialogue to facilitate there being less Linkin Park. It's too bad that every channel in the 5.1 mix has that damn song all over it. There isn't even a single channel that has the entire speech louder than the music.

I may end up just making this ending a branching option (assuming that I can figure out how to do that).

klokwerk said:

The song may not be the best, but I think it works well enough. That one simple line of dialogue is more than adequate I think.

Yeah, I wish there had been another song playing (or none at all) with the new dialogue that I found (it's actually a different take), but I still think it's a better piece than the Linkin Park song, if not a little too sentimental a piece.