ben_danger said:

wow, love the crawl! certainly looks like star wars now! are you going to keep the actual text the same though? it seems a bit brief (as did the original!) but the changes you have made are great.

the page directly before it could have the star wars logo, so you see the logo, then turn the page and its the crawl, kind of like the film?

the colouring wound literally be the icing on the cake.

Yes, it's brief because I have deleted all the recap to the previous episodes... at this time we already know, for example, that there is a new republic! we know it from X-wing series, Rogue squadron, etc...

and it's brief also because it have to enter in the small space of the page... ^_^

and...yes! the previous pages are "a long time ago in GFFA" and the logo!! :D