I guess the issues I've had are a bit performance wise.

The timing between "There is a great disturbance in the force" and "I have felt it" and again back to "We have a new enemy" are huge... massive... of course, in your edit Ady, being PAL, the pacing seems better...

But in NTSC... the timing is gigantic... it always seems so... "I'm not paying attention"... that's the only issue I really had... I know it sounds fine to you... but in NTSC... its a bit long..

Then we also have the issue of the Emperor being seen but his "theme" not being heard. I thought about maybe finding some low instrumental part and having it layered under the original music but I had no luck... I might keep looking but that was why I changed the music too... perhaps haphazardly... just to raise that eyebrow...

The ended I edited in because the idea of maybe showing Palpatine on Coruscant was mentioned... and I thought it would be rather poetic to have vader bow.. look back up... and the emperor still there... watching... then have his image fade out only to see him still staring forward in his char on Coruscant...

As if the conversation had concearned him... and that he sensed something in Vader... and in how Vader spoke... but not enough to truly cause him worry as he had more important things to work on... Luke...

I'll keep toying with it. I'm warming up to your edit as I see it's not that far gone from mine...