Altering the order of shots will really mess up the soundtrack, and finding a cue from other areas in the score is not a good idea for ESB, imo. I do prefer the way it plays out as we are used to. Darth Stewie's re-arrangement results in too much cutting back and forth and could be disorienting. Just my opinion, though.
The snow seems almost too gray to my eyes, but if it matches closer to GOUT, then it's fine by me. How 'bout a third version of this sequence with a three-way split amongst Revisited/2004/GOUT?