It's not that I think you're doing a bad job or should stop, it looks like you have made an amazing improvement. I just wonder if LFL is actually going to do a release of the ot that is a competant transfer at all (for any version). If these projects along with the Close Encounters and Blade Runner sets don't embarass them into getting it in gear, I don't know what will.
I'm not sure if the starfield should be completely totally black as the bars. I don't know if this is true but wouldn't all the stars so far away that they aren't visible still contribute a tiny bit of light so that the black space is extremely, 99.9% to total black, dark grey.