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Johnny Ringo
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Ideas Wanted: How would you alter Star Trek 10? [Possible 56k warning // Images]
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2-Apr-2008, 4:41 AM

There’s been talk of this before but I’ve been thinking over the past few days about whether the movie could be cut into something more enjoyable. I don’t think I have enough ideas to make it worthwhile yet but I figured that if there’s enough good ideas between us then it might be viable as a fan edit.

one of the things I hate most happens right away, The main titles - with backward lettering. That of course is an easy fix. I’ve been toying with some ideas but I don’t have access to the fonts I want…

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/8296/title4vu6.jpg
http://img241.imageshack.us/img241/876/title3em3.jpg
http://img127.imageshack.us/img127/5572/title2gt1.jpg

Does ANYONE have any of these, or similar fonts? I’ve only had a quick browse around but every website just has the same 5 or so useless ST fonts.

http://img151.imageshack.us/img151/6059/title1sq9.jpg

Anyhow, here is a quick test i did using fonts i DO have on hand [WIP] - i TRIED doing titles in the really curvy font from the NEMESIS promo stuff but it looked horrible. I would like to try have something like the animated bird of prey logo but i really don’t know at this point. I just want to get the ball rolling so others will jump in.

http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/2712/title6dy8.jpg
http://img510.imageshack.us/img510/4926/title5zx2.jpg

One other thing I noticed is that the colours of the film seem really saturated, this looks fine in some places but elsewhere things look a bit odd. I played around a little with tinting and desaturating. Not to make things more correct, just to make it easier on the etes mostly. A cool side effect of this is that the green colours are toned down a bit later on, which i like. - oh and it takes some edge off the overly bleached yellow kolarus [sp?] segment [argo rally et al]

things actually look kind of good in the trailer -

trailer screens
movie screens

I purposely darkened these shots, which doesn’t really make sense, if it’s dark then why aren’t the lights on? - But I like the look of it. Movie shots then my tweaked versions. these are only WIP based on a quick idea.

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http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/5517/z03wi2.jpghttp://img187.imageshack.us/img187/6244/z04vk1.jpg
http://img185.imageshack.us/img185/2108/z05yu0.jpghttp://img183.imageshack.us/img183/6291/z06ii0.jpg
http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/2971/z07jw6.jpghttp://img404.imageshack.us/img404/9692/z08zy1.jpg
http://img366.imageshack.us/img366/6743/z09cf5.jpghttp://img405.imageshack.us/img405/6749/z10vo2.jpg
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The romulans in this scene look almost a sickly shade of green. I’ve tried to eliminate that a little. I also hated to visual effects of the characters ‘turning to stone’ so I’ve hidden that a little. Of course these ideas don’t mean much if the movie still sucks, Just an idea.

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The wedding reception is not so bad, except that everythingthing seems a bit ‘orange’. At leasst to my eyes.

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http://img301.imageshack.us/img301/9334/039zy7.jpghttp://img517.imageshack.us/img517/8594/039wp8.jpg
Hmm, what to do about Wesley? - remove him / change his outfit / ignore it?

http://img172.imageshack.us/img172/6674/043nf5.jpghttp://img254.imageshack.us/img254/9953/043ji2.jpg
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And while on that note, what’s the go with Geordi? I thought his eyes were healed back in the Briar patch? Why is he back to implants?

http://img164.imageshack.us/img164/8784/057to8.jpghttp://img517.imageshack.us/img517/1903/057nr0.jpg
the colours here do look a tad washed out - Makes it look like it was overcast at the reception, I’m sure I could arrive at a decent middle ground though.

I was trying to decide what could be done with the remans, from totally removing them [impractical] to making them NOT look like “Space Vampires”. One thing is certain, I don’t like the yellow eyes. Contact lenses lose the novelty when most of the cast is wearing them i guess.

So I had an idea, I dunno if it will fly, what do people reckon of [if possible] making the Viceroy [at least] Blind?..relying on his telepathic abilities to see.

http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/4929/noeyes1ic5.jpghttp://img177.imageshack.us/img177/6959/noeyes2ql3.jpghttp://img178.imageshack.us/img178/1777/noeyes3kv9.jpg
http://img142.imageshack.us/img142/6121/noeyeswuazy0.jpg

Hit me with your ideas guys, No matter how crazy. I haven’t even started on [what i hate about] the plot yet…Have a whinge/rant if you like but I’d prefer constructive ideas.