I like the overall concept of what you have going here, its interesting.
The wipes need to be less severe. The hard edges are VERY jarring. I would use more Lucasian wipes.
I also didnt like the music drowning out the Sound FX of Obi-Wan's Jedi starfighter and the music only portion of Yoda and Sidious' fight is blasphemy in my book. I would never cut out lightsaber duel sound effects.