Some comments from a personal point of view:
- The Star Wars logos on the front and spine would look nicer in a silver metallic style.
- Personally I would like to keep the UK "U" certification green triangle, to match official UK releases. (I know it's then illogical because this is Region 0 NTSC!) But I can put that back in myself.
- Remove "Special Widescreen Edition" - that's an old-fashioned logo used on letterboxed VHS releases.
- The running time is wrong due to the PAL/NTSC differences.
- Remove the text about close-captioning.
- Remove "hi-fi stereo" - that's a VHS term.
- Add in more DVD-specific stuff. (I'm not really sure how this should look, but I will have a think and check out some official DVDs.)
By the way, did you used to be DarthBoMan? Did you forget your password?