

I do have to agree with NormanS on this minor thing though:
The explosion right at the end, looks a bit odd. I think it's because it follows the camera as it pans to the right (it's like sticked in the center)
But I can live with it, God only knows how much you have fixed already, and I thank you sir for all your hard work.
I have a question, on the Q&A you said you will add our names to the end credits, how do you plan to do this?, getting them all from this thread will be a major headeache.