Normally I'd prefer to see the whole thing before giving any kind of critique, but Ady's worked so damn hard that he deserves some indication that he's going the right way (not that 100 pages of comments won't have given him that!)
Normally I'd prefer to see the whole thing before giving any kind of critique, but Ady's worked so damn hard that he deserves some indication that he's going the right way (not that 100 pages of comments won't have given him that!)