well, the idea was to try to extend the birth. By having Yoda going to meditate when they say she's going to die... I thought maybe it would help give the illusion of time passing. The problem then is that Obi-wan leaving Mustafar and arriving at polis mossa have to be right next to eachother.

The visions I want to trim further and some parts are a bit blurry...as for yoda, I think I could probably replace the close up on him, and leave the other shots (the one behind him and the one of him from a slight distance).

as for using Obi-Wan's line... I know of no way because it's burried in the SFX quite well in the vision that Anakin has... it would be all distorted and stuff...

I may flip part of it around to be how it is in the film... but I thought I'd post this... it's definately quite rough... but shows some of the ideas and thoughts I'd had...

I do have to say though that as far as having visions of things they cannot have seen... I don't think that's an issue at all... Obi-Wan could never have seen a thousand people crying out in despair and then suddenly go silent... and yet that's what he says he felt/saw/heard in Episode IV... so I think that it isn't an issue.

as for the filters... I used gausan blur and light rays...

I wish there were a way to make it more dynamic...

Anyways... that's just some ideas...