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 I have one little tiny suggestion though. The only part I found a bit jarring at all (and this may be because it was edited for the trailer) was when Obi-Wan ignites his lightsaber in the upright position and in the next shot he's holding it more paralell to the ground. I think that if you added a lightsaber motion whur sound off screen in between these shots (during the vader shot) it would feel like he moved the saber when we weren't looking. Just a thought. It was so cool, very well done.
  I have one little tiny suggestion though. The only part I found a bit jarring at all (and this may be because it was edited for the trailer) was when Obi-Wan ignites his lightsaber in the upright position and in the next shot he's holding it more paralell to the ground. I think that if you added a lightsaber motion whur sound off screen in between these shots (during the vader shot) it would feel like he moved the saber when we weren't looking. Just a thought. It was so cool, very well done. 
 

 The only constructive crit I have is the tie attack (the one with cloned ties on the left and right) seems a little too symetrical... maybe subtract a few ties at random?  ... Or have them attack in a wedge formation rather than a wall o' ties?  Just my $0.02.  Congrats on the video card
 The only constructive crit I have is the tie attack (the one with cloned ties on the left and right) seems a little too symetrical... maybe subtract a few ties at random?  ... Or have them attack in a wedge formation rather than a wall o' ties?  Just my $0.02.  Congrats on the video card 


 
 









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