Now for the goods. As promised I've got the remaining footage of Grievous for everyone to see. The first scene where Grievous talks to Palpatine on Utapau works perfectly on a purely technical level, however I'm worried that too little information is passed to give Grievous much of a presence. The second scene suffers even more from this, as there is very little usable dialog. Let me know if what he says A) Makes sense B) Isn't too close to his original dialog in the Clone Wars series.
Grievous 1
Grievous 2
Enjoy