Have you cosidered muting out "your swords please". maybe linger on the Jedi and then have him simply come out with "wouldn't want to make a mess of things...." Haven't really looked at the shot to conmsider this, just putting it out there. I think he'd still maintain that "I'm a smug asshole" sound.

It's all looking very good expect for one thing. [I refer to GM's edits here] the part where Dooku ignites his saber. the shot itself just doesnt't look right AND the rapid cut from that to his face feels very jarring. I don't know how you could get around this. Possibly have it ignite off screen, If I recall there's a shot somewhere there looking at the Jedi from behind Dooku.