Hey, GM. I do try to keep previous conversations in mind when I respond. It's not that I didn't understand that you wanted to show Palpatine's corruption of Anakin, but the line cut so tight against Anakin's, and in the non-rushed tone of Palpatine, doesn't sound like he's interrupting; it sounds like a bad edit.
Maybe you could tweak Palpatine's audio to make it sound more like he's interrupting.