One of the choices I made early one was to propel the pylon fighting forward by not splitting it up like you see in the film. By moving the Yoda crawling scene there, it splits up that action and I feel, would slow it down more so.

I'd be tempted to remove the entire thing completely, which would do what you are saying, and keep it from interrupting what I'm saying, but I think there needs to be some mention of what happens...

I had put some thought into it, and as much as I like the edit you did, cutting to the explosion, then back to them running for cover...it works well... I'm just not entirely sure if I'd want that because then it would push the cut back to latter...and as I said, it's not something I really want to do.

I dunno... I guess if I could come up with a compromise I liked, I'd do it.

I can see how it would be both ways... and as much as I like your way... I'm kinda want it to be this way... I might try editing it the way you are saying just to give the option...

Let me know what you all think (sorry it took a while to upload. It's ready now)