Again, it's very very rough...in fact, the second half with Obi picking up the saber is extremely rough. There needs to be a few more shots incorperated into it. I wish there were some shots of the lava bank without Anakin smoldering. That would be ideal.
Then, you could make it seem as though Obi came down to the bank to see if he could find Anakin, but all he found was his saber.
That is what I'm trying to get across in this edit......
AnakinFallsAndObiSearches