Wow,story wise I much prefer anakin going over the 'waterfall'. Now there's the sense that Obi Wan assumes he's died but without any certainty. I say that if you can polish this up then it's a great way to go. I could happily do without the whole fight along the lava river and on the bank.

I'm assuming you'd wanna cut the giant floating arm from the 2nd instance the camera moves down the 'waterfall'. there's probably enough footage there to simply start later in the shot.

I always liked the start of the duel and various parts of it, but ultimately it went a bit over the top and the end was a bit of a mess, It felt like they painted themselves into a corner. after going to great lengths to show us just how evenly matched they are, to suddenly have take him out in a single strike. plus I didn't really like that obi would do something like that.

I'll go re watch the rest of the clips now.