First, I've been toying with some ways to pull out of the fight and back to Coruscant.
The first was by adding a shot of the Senate building, but I felt it was too abrupt so I decided to add a shot of a volcano erupting from latter. I then take the two parts from around the volcano erupting latter and push them together
I made two short clips to show these ides. I'm curious what you all think:
Senate shot
EDIT:
Ignore the Volcano eruption, I Found that in the first trailer there is an alternate angle shot of them struggling I think I'll just add that instead, THEN cut to the senate shot.
What do you all think of the Senate shot and the order from there?
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Because I had used the volcano shot from latter in the sequence for earlier, I removed it from latter so as not to have it repeat. Here, in this video, I have the shot removed, and the shot before and after pushed together. I think I may leave it this way.
Also after the arm drops, in the film it cuts back to curuscant, but since I took care of that, I simply pushed the shot before and the shot of the arm floating from after Yoda together. What do you all think of that?
Lava float
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The question about him going over the cliff and all is nice... but I'm curious because why would we want to show that he survived it at all... wouldn't it be better to simply say he didn't... it would be more correct continuity wise with the original trilogy... saying Anakin died.
I also made an attempt at doing an edit of what you asked. I'm still working on it. Let me know what you think:
Anakin Goes Over Lava-fall