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Post #291542

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darkhelmet
Parent topic
Episode 3 - Editing Back in Progress (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
29-Jun-2007, 3:42 AM
Originally posted by: Hal 9000
(paraphrased)Lucas botched what otherwise could have been good plot points by changing the script late in the game.
Please, forgive the abbreviation , and thanks for the breakdown of the Episode 3 that could have been. The Clone Wars montage could have been so cool and such a better continuation of where Episode 2 left off!

The other parts you mentioned that were changed or created to fill the gaps go a reee-aaally long way to explaining the weakness that exists in those parts as they now stand. Bummer.
Heck, I'd be willing to send you a copy of my edit, for what it's worth.

If you wanted to see it.

Heck, yeah! Seems like you have a critical eye for a more mature story. I'll PM you.