I think the best thing about the clip is that you don't feel like anything is really missing. It all seems to flow nicely. The sound in a few places seemed a little jarring - especially the window breaking - but i guess you are still making adjustments on this. The music seemed to fit well and doesn't distract from the action.

The 'redshirt' deaths are slightly improved and the 'Wilhelm' made me smile. I can see why they originally had Palpy take out the 3 Jedi , To show how good he is but the way it was shown made them simply look incompetent given that it never looked like he did much to best them. I guess the main problem there is that they were making it up as they went along. Any improvements are welcome