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Post #284700

Author
tellan
Parent topic
STAR WARS: EP IV 2004 REVISITED ADYWAN *1080p HD VERSION NOW IN PRODUCTION
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Date created
28-Apr-2007, 6:43 PM
ady, sound aside, a few crits from the clip. considering I have also spent months looking at this scene I know it pretty well.

1) frame 3320 to about 3395 there is a noticeable shimmy to the leading left side of the nose of the star destroyer above the Tantive. ovously you've masked here and something is ever so slightly showing through from the background.

2) frame 3600, the laser flash is tinted and not pure white.

3) motion tracking between tatooine and the atmosphere haze in the master establishing shot is off and doesn't line up right. the haze still has motion after the planet has stopped moving. its only a few frames out but....

also the curvature of the haze doesn't match the planet.