GoodMusician, Wow! Where to begin!? I love your edits. I like the way you ended the scene between Obi-Wan and Padme on Coruscant, and the way you inserted the shots of Coruscant after Padme departs in her ship. Also, your audio transitions from scene to scene seem very well done with only minor tweaking required. And the Yoda's vision on Polis Massa is an amazing idea, and the shot of Anikan's hand clawing up the bank and then cutting away quickly is awsome. The way you edited the birth of Luke, and dropped the s off of babies in the Polis Massa scene also works very well. And the music swelling after Padme dies is very powerful in a good way. Overall, your edit does a very good job at improving the ending. Good job, and keep the ideas coming!