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twister111
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Episode 3 - Editing Back in Progress (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
13-Apr-2007, 2:44 AM
Originally posted by: darkhelmet

Yeah, maybe Lucas should've asked us fans to write the Prequels.


I know that if I wrote the prequels this scene would have been in place:

Vader and, Anakin go to fix a problem in the ship. Since they're parked in an asteriod they put on the black spacesuits(a.k.a. Vader suit's). They get in an arguement, and start fighting. Obiwan hears that and, goes out there quickly with the experimental breathing masks(what's in ESB). Obiwan can't tell who's who so he tries to seperate them with the force. Cave in happens due to the force use of Obiwan, Obiwan is seperated from Vader and, Anakin. He hears the fighting continue behind the rocks and, hears someone die. Obiwan tries as fast as he can to uncover the rock wall. All the while calling out "Darth! Anakin!" Cave wall explodes and, a voice calls out "Anakin is dead! I killed him!" Obiwan quickly uses the force to throw a big rock at him and, escapes in the ship. Vader uses the force to ride the asteriod where ever.


Anyways, yeah I agree with a lot of the comments that the ending feels rushed. I don't have any comments other then what's already been said though...