The issues I have have already been addressed: the use of Otis and Ms. Tessmacher in the escape instead of the QFP footage (only because they disappear after that scene), and the possible use of the sick Clark footage to show the initial effects of the scratch, as well as the oil tanker footage. Also, some spots seem kind of quick, like nuclear crisis right after the Paris scene, and the cut straight from the Planet scene to the press scene at the end. Unfortunately, the kind of footage necessary to give that kind of breathing room isn't really there, so you did a great job with what you had to work with. It's a shame there isn't any footage to give the Clark/Lana/Lois issue some resolution. I hope in the sequel to Returns, Lana is somewhere. It would be less than the best, but...oh, well. I suppose when they made III they were trying to set up a triangle for the sequel, but instead we got Lacy Warfield. *sigh*
Overall, you did a great job of making the pieces fit together reasonably well. It's really amazing! Awesome job!